HW3 Thesis Statement and Outline Draft 49582018 林依亭

General goal: to inform Specific goal: I want my audience to know more about the importance of applying appropriate cosmetics. Thesis statement: According to physical level and mental level, applying cosmetics can be beneficial as long as it is appropriate. Outline: I. On physical level, the amount of cosmetics we apply has a lot to do with a healthy facial skin. A. Without any cosmetics, our face expose to the polluted air and ultraviolet rays. 1. my experience: A rash of pimples, sunburn and allergy during the time when I spent 30 minutes riding to school with nothing on my face 2. outside supporting resources: Compare the statistics between the present and the prior citizens who consulting skin doctors. B. With too much cosmetics, our face will accelerate aging or sometimes worsen if the cleansing is not throughout. 1. my experience: The pimples on my face got worsen whenever I tried to cover them with heavy makes-up. 2. outside supporting resources: A research points out that applying heavy cosmetics speed up the face aging. II. As to mental level, it is considerable that applying cosmetics is seen a kind of politeness, on one hand. A. Without any cosmetics, you may look exhausted, sleepy or however awful impression others will bear toward you. 1. my experience: Whenever I tend not to apply make-up, my attitude toward the day or the event is obvious pathic. 2. supporting resources: Through my convey with some classmates, those who are lazy to put anything on face are not so adorable especially when those whose faces are in ill condition. B. With too much cosmetics, it sometimes gives a negative impression. 1. my experience: My feelings toward those who wear heavy make-up is superficial. 2. outside resources: Almost all elders who I have asked bear the same or even objective feelings toward those with heavy makes-up. III. On the other hand, makes-up can provide you confidence and energy but, at the same time, it can also draw you dimmer if you put too much reliance on it. A. With proper makes-up, you feel more energetic through a brighter looking 1. my experience: Compared with the days when I didn't wear any make up, I felt relatively positive and confident with some make up. 2. outside resources: Interviewing with my female classmates, I received almost no agreement from those who apply make up. B. Relatively, those who try to put as much make-up as they can are lacking a sense of safety: the more they put on, the less confident they are. 1. my experience: Whenever there are something wrong on my face, I am more anxious than usual about how to cover those defects. 2. outside resources: A psychological study support this idea.

My Strength & Weakness of Public Speaking

My Strength & Weakness of Public Speaking 應外三 49582018 林依亭 Claire Strength Voice Volume: I'm proud of my voice volume for it always serves as a strong backup. The louder the voice is, the more composed and confident I will be. It spares me great stage-fright but brings power. Powerful volume always catches audience's attention longer. Facial Expression: Once I feel nervous, I tend to smile. Perhaps it's not a strength for some others, it's quite a good relief to ease the state of nerve for me. I believe that one with smile is more accessible than another with a rigid face. It shortens the distance between the audience and me. Clear Pronunciation: I lay great emphasis on clear pronunciation. For me, clear pronunciation is a crucial element to speech. I am able to balance fluency and correct pronunciation during my speech. Weakness Deficient Preparation: I am not a serious person in many ways, so as to my attitude. I am always deficient in preparation and that makes a fatal defect of me. Too Little Gesture: I notice that most of my classmates use proper gesture when conveying their speeches. Compared to them, I found myself badly lacking proper gesture. I don't even remember whether I had moved or not. Unnecessary Touches: I have a bad habit when I am anxious. I subconsciously touch my nose or other parts on face to shift my emotion. It usually emerge in the beginning.. After I adapt myself to the speech (or the atmosphere), I no longer have any movement.

speech planning

49582018 Claire 林依亭 I. Brainstorming list Women marketing (What serves as a major role in women marketing) Tour guide (Who is suitable of being a tour guide) Marketing analysis (How to attract the consumers) Traveling (What I can gain from a trip) Seeing movies (why movies allure) Photography (why I like photograph) Sliming industry (Women never stop dieting until they are self-satisfied) Part-time college workers (Is it worth doing part-time job as a college student) Strayed pets (Is it worth making laws to prohibit abandon pets) II. Concept map Subject: women marketing A. Categories of women marketing Cosmetics, health concern, fashion marketing, product promotion B. Women marketing product Cosmetics, body care stuff, clothing, and special requisite of food. Perfume, accessories C. Women marketing target clients Range from 14~40 years old. Most are female. Demographic Data 1. The average audience member's education level is college. 2. The ages range from 19~22. The average age is about 20. 3. The audience is approximately 2% male and 98% female. 4. My estimate of the average income level of the audience is middle. 5. most audience members are of the same majors 6. most audience members are of the same religion 7. most audience members are of the same nationality 8. most audience members are from different cities 9. Most audience members speak English as a second language. Summary: For my audience members are my classmate, there will be little difficulties conveying my idea. Besides, major members are female who certainly have great interest in woman issue. As to the male member, they are mostly interested in women and thus woman issues are catching as either information or entertainment for them as well. III. Analyzing your audience Summary description of key audience characteristics Owing to most of my classmates are girls, and of a similar age to me, I consider that topics about women issue are more attractive. College girls concern how to look more beautiful; as to college boys, they also concern on girls' appearance. For closer relationship between boys and girls emerges frequently at this time. So both boys and girls are interested in how a pretty is made—their inside and outside. Subject-specific data 1. The average audience member's knowledge of the subject is likely to be moderate because appearance is what can be seen everyday so they know what a pretty. 2. The average audience member's interest in this subject is likely to be high because most youth pay great attention to appearance 3. The average audience member's attitude toward my subject is likely to be negative because they might regard it too shallow. 4. My initial credibility with the audience is likely to be medium because I'm though not professional but at least I am confident in persuading them with my own looking. IV. Select a topic The original topics Women marketing Tour guide Marketing analysis Traveling Seeing movies Photography Sliming industry Part-time college workers Strayed pets After considering the association with my audiences, the remaining topics are more appropriate. Women marketing Sliming industry Part-time college workers Traveling Seeing movies Concerning the setting, the remaining topics are more appropriate. Women marketing Part-time college workers Traveling The very last topic I choose Women marketing V. A specific goal Type of speech: informative 1. When a draft of your general speech goal using a complete sentence that specifies the type of response you want from the audience. I want the audience know that women distribute more on appearance than others think 2. Revise the infinitive to make it reflect the specific audience response you desire I want the audience recogonize the effort a woman will do to achieve pretty. 3. Check the number of ideas expressed in the statement. If the statement contains more than one idea, select one and rewrite the statement I want my audience recognize there are lots of things a woman will do to achieve good looking 4. Improve the statement so that it describes the precise focus of your speech as it relates to your intended audience. 5. I want my audience recognize the expense of what a woman will do to achieve good looking The final draft of the specific goal: I want my audience recognize the most expense of what a woman will do to achieve good looking.